User blog:René Descartes/Survivor

Hello everyone!

As some of you well know, I have been writing a novella-fanfiction called Survivor. It is about a Player who finds a village and fights monsters to defend the human race. Currently, he has just returned from the caverns, where his hunters found another Player. This is a major turning point in the story, and this Player will become very important.

I want to know what you all think about this story. Please feel free to criticize weak points in my plotline. Constructive criticism is beneficial in improving this short story.