Thread:Nedly/@comment-216.100.90.25-20131028155802/@comment-216.100.90.25-20131028160558

216.100.90.25 wrote: Ned's Redemption -Among The Fallen, Book One, Chapter 4 Corrupt Mainframe

Иed

Evil Ned

Dead Tree Wood

This is just the BEGINNING!

Nedly, you really need to refine your ideas...and your grammar. OK I may have been a little harsh, but seriously...your stuff needs some SERIOUS editing.