Talk:The Book of Notch/@comment-216.100.90.24-20131031171543/@comment-216.100.90.24-20131031215203

I am looking for feedback because I want to make this story better and eradicate any plot holes or unclear portions of this storyline. I don't care so much for attention as for feedback on what can be improved or added. However, I do thank you for your helpful comments on this article.