Talk:Rise to Power Book 3: 200 Year Return/@comment-15980859-20140117035100/@comment-24138036-20140117161449

I suggest that you allow time for yourself to refresh from a recent fanfiction. You are writing these stories back-to-back, forcing ideas to come to mind, and therefore lose the creative twist found in seasoned writers.

You should probably slow down both in how often you write and in how fast the storyline progresses.