Talk:Ruins of Alpha/@comment-216.100.90.25-20131021152617

1. Check your grammar and spelling. I cannot get past your incredible errors, but I do not want to tamper with your story by editing it.

2. It was just a dream? This is infamously the worst plot twist ever.

3. The story does not make much sense. There is a worldwide complex of RUINS built by sapient beings? Why would they only build RUINS!?