Talk:The White Enderman Part 1/@comment-6395730-20140303165846/@comment-76.170.153.197-20140303200435

But this isn't a poem. There's no rhyme, flow, or story being told in any even slightly poetic way. Grammar isn't subject to creativity. You can play aroung with words and sentence structure, but the Oxford comma is the Oxford comma, and 'whom' isn't a word you can just randomly replace 'who' with and sound smart. Same applies to capitalization. (although I will admit, real life diamonds are white, I figured it would refer to MC diamonds considering that this is MC fiction) And seriously? The whole 'Herobrine' thing could have been a lot clearer. Like, it could've said, "Steve was struck with fear as the figure of a god stood before him" or something like that, not just switching to a creeper.