To the far lands! ( Minecraft adventure story)

Authour's note: Hey ppl, this is my first story/page on the MCFFW, i would like some constructive feedback.Thanks for reading!

'''Introduction

This story is about 2 Mincraftians (idk if i spelled that right) who are silblings.One is a boy called Steven, the other is a girl called Ali. Their dream is to explore the far lands, which people have been recently banned from going, because of a terrible tragedy that happened there. This does not stop Steven and Ali, who are used to exploring. Will they make it?

Chapter One

The sqaure sun was rising above the giant hills, where Steven and Ali's family lived.Their house was a small, wooden farm cottage, that was practically falling to pieces.The loud, noisey animals woke Ali up, at 5am.She yawned and reluctantly got out of bed.She walked over to the small window, pulled the torn brown curtains and looked out to the horses stable.Her horse, Midnight, was banging the wall with her hooves, clearly wanting to be let out. "Alright Midnight, im coming, im coming" said Ali.She got dressed, slipped on her riding gear and picked up an iron sword off her dresser.She was a very cautious girl, and she knew some hostile mobs may be waiting outside.As she crept to the front door, not wanting to wake up everyone else, she opened the door slowly and put her head outside.She saw a zombie, standing under a tree, seeking shelter from the sun, which was rising steadily.Ali clutched the handle of her sword, walked out and closed the door. ( sorry, can't write anymore, i will,write more at a later stage)